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The Crush (Part 8) by: Raven
Here's part 8! it's comin w/ a shocker (kinda)! --------------- It is now Thursday- 3 days before the dance. Which unfortunately is the only time I have had available, and I am now going shopping with Victoria at the mall. Turns out she has a date as wellâ?¦ Me: I still canâ??t believe you asked Evan to the dance, I mean I know you liked him but, I didnâ??t know you had it in youâ?¦ Victoria: Well, thank you Raven for that uplifting comment. *sarcastic* Me: Well, youâ??re welcome. *laughs* anyway, 1st things 1st I need some nice underwear. Victoria: *looking at me w/ a look* I thought you said that not how I rollâ?¦ Me: What?! *playing dumb* Victoria: Donâ??t play dumb! You said thatâ?¦like, 2 weeks ago. Me: Ugh, I know what youâ??re talking about. Iâ??m not sleeping with anyone. I just want my body to look its best under my beautiful dressâ?¦ Victoria: Whatever. Just promise you donâ??t do something you regret. Me: whoa, whoa, whoa! I told you already thatâ??s not how itâ??s goin down! Victoria: OK. I guess we could go into the store named after moi. Victoriaâ??s Secret! *smiles* Me: You wish! I got the sexiest underwear I could find; a black thong with lace and a black strapless push up bra with lace. They looked a little advanced for my age, but when I put them on I felt so sexy. After looking around I got this dress: http://s7d4.scene7.com/s7ondemand/zoom/flasht_zoom.jsp?company=BonTon&sku=249070&zoomwidth=500&zoomheight=650&vc=logo2=false A simple black dress; just my style. Itâ??s now Saturday the day of the dance! Iâ??m at home to getting dressed. I looked in the mirror and couldnâ??t believe my eyes. Too bad my mom wasnâ??t here to see this; my first dance with a date (thatâ??s a guy). I know it sounds cheesy but I wish she could be here taking pictures. The plan was for Michael to come over to my house then Evan and Victoria would pick us up. Michaelâ??s P.O.V. I was thinking while walking across the street to Raven's house. Michael: Man, Iâ??m so nervous. But I should be-right? This is my first date with Raven. Sheâ??s so beautiful. I love her so much. I hope this night goes perfectlyâ?¦ Iâ??ve arrived at Ravenâ??s front door, but before I rang the door bell I checked my clothes and my breath. *rings door bell* Ding, dong, dong, dingâ?¦ My P.O.V. I was in the living room waiting for Michael to arrive when I heard the bell ring. Me: *nervous* oh snap! I got off the couch and looked at myself in the mirror hanging near the front door before I answered. Me: Who is it? Michael: Itâ??s Michaelâ?¦ Me: *sighs then opens door* *wide eyed and smiling from ear to ear* Come inâ?¦ Michael: *walks in* You look beautifulâ?¦ *looking me up and down* Me: *blushes* Thank you. You look very nice as well. Michael did in fact look great! He was wearing a white long sleeved button down with a burgundy colored vest sweater over it and some simple black slacks. (this is the best guy outfit I could think ofâ?¦lol so donâ??t judge on that too much). Why did this night feel awkward so far? I think I just realized how much I really did like Michael. It was like we were soul mates or something. (I know cheesy right?) We were just sitting on the couch with one another making small talk about school then our ride had come. In the carâ?¦ Everyone greeted one another blah, blah, blahâ?¦ We now arrived at the school danceâ?¦ After a little dancing and mingling with Michael, I went to go talk to Victoria who was with Evan on the dance floor. Me: Hey guys. Sorry Evan, but can I talk to Victoria for a little bit? Evan: Sure. *walks off* Me: Victoria, promise you wonâ??t get mad at me? Victoria: *curious* dependsâ?¦ Me: OK, Iâ??ll just say it. I think Iâ??m gonna have sex with Michael tonightâ?¦ Victoria: *shocked* WHAT? Victoria was so loud almost everyone looked our way to find out where the loud voice came from. Me: Calm down your making a scene! Victoria: *still in shock* Are you sure, this means heâ??ll break your virginity. Me: I know, and I want him to. I think itâ??s the perfect time for it. When we leave Iâ??ll invite him in andâ?¦I guess-itâ??ll go from there. Victoria: I donâ??t think you should, but if you feel that way about him then who am I to get in your wayâ?¦ Me: Thanks. *smiles and hugs* We were all at the dance for about an hour until we left and I was so anxious. Not only that I was fully prepared. I think I subconsciously prepared for this night. I even cleaned my room; and the underwear I had on fit the moment as well. I was also gonna have the house to myself. This didnâ??t feel so wrong after all. To be continued... Part 9 will be the final scene and beware it will involve sex. But, it won't be added until I get 10+ votes! Thanks. You guys rock! -Raven 1/28/10
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